Feliks quickly regained his composure. Poker faced, he handed the book to Toris. Unfortunately, his hands were shaking, but he tried to pass it off as he finally got to meet the author of his favourite book. He found it hard to look into Toris' eyes, his mind racing with a thousand questions he'd kept to himself all these years. At least he knew he was doing well. His face was turned away from him, unable to bear looking into the eyes of the man he trusted so much.
Toris was sure that the person who was standing in front of him was the person who he could never forget. It was the pretty
"Gurrrr..."
Toris Lorinaitis suddenly felt his face turn red when he heard the embarrassing noise coming from his empty stomach. He quickly looked around to make sure there was no one in the vicinity before he let out a sigh. The emotions mixed in that sigh were complicated; It wasn't merely a relief but also kind of worry. He noticed that it wasn't early at all only when he looked at the time on his watch. He had been sitting alone in the park, writing on his notebook in the cold winter day since the morning.
Toris' dream had always been to become a writer from the first time he was assigned to write his own story for his English homework
Improving image composition! by FriendlyHand, journal
Improving image composition!
Sometimes the details of our illustration look great, but then when we step back and look at the composition... it's a little boring or muddy or crowded or our eyes wander away from the parts that looked so good up close... Where are our focal points? Why doesn't this illustration grab my attention and hold it? Composition can make or break a piece. Here are some links that show examples of good and bad compositions and describe why certain layouts are more successful than others. Various tips and rules are described and illustrated. I hope you'll enjoy these as much as I do.
Composition in art as described by wikipedia (this link is a littl